December 1st, 2006
ANC—- SUMMARIZER 12/1
Posted by alginp in Uncategorized
She introduces the book and says she is making the journal.
She talks about the party that she wasn’t invited to and that she thinks is the stupidest thing ever.
She also explains how she goes to her friends house a lot of times and how her friend always has a bag of chips and coke with her.
She also explains how her uncle Carl Joe lives in
West Virginia.
She starts to explain how the bed is heavy, and uncomfortable, and then she says how hard it is getting the bed down to the attic and how they had to slide it down.
on December 2nd, 2006 at 9:49 am
She who? I have no idea what you are referring to in your post because you don’t have a topic sentence that introduces what you are talking about. Your posts need to be in paragraph form - you have separate sentences aligned in the center. You also do not have any support for why those ideas are important to the story. Carl RAY is her cousin, not her uncle.
on December 4th, 2006 at 12:07 pm
You put Carl Joe his name is Carl Ray and he’s the cousin not the uncle. Why did you have sentences seperate? You should of put in paragraph form. What I do like is that you don’t summerize way to long it’s about less than 1o words. keep it up algin love Kevie